This site is a place where a photojournalist | reporter |
blogger | graphic designer and social media user interprets web happenings in
order to understand an ever changing technological world - as they relate to her world.
What is it to ‘reinvent’ yourself, to stay employed, to see
a child grow into an adult, to return to graduate school at mid-fifties - an otherwise
approaching retirement but not-quite-there-yet, time of life?
A wife, mother, employee, freelancer
and hybrid artist, the author approaches life with eyes wide-open, heart ever
hoping for connection - not necessarily the virtual kind.
Stay tuned for curious inquiry about living within and without
self-imposed boundaries.
I really like this! You use only about 100 words, and yet we get a pretty full picture of who you are, where you’ve been, and where you’d like to be in the future. The only comment I have is the paragraph ending in a question (What is it to?). It reads weird to me. Is it meant to be two sentences? Like: “What is it to ‘reinvent yourself? To stay employed, to see a child…” etc.etc. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteI see how the run-on sentence can be strange to read. That's what happens when I write as I think.... wandering minds makes for loose sentence structure! I'll do a re-write! Thanks!!
DeleteShort, sweet and to the point. You are going to cringe when you see my about me page. Sorry! I love how directed this is. I agree with Juniper on that paragraph. Maybe breaking it up into a couple of sentences? Otherwise your writing is beautiful. Very passionate in so little words. Great work!
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